Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically accurate, concise, and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Use past tense for past events, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., because, so, although). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually spent most of my time playing team sports with friends, so my parents didn’t buy one for me. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbor’s bike to ride around the park.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, use comparative forms correctly, and add a specific reason or example. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) and correct adjective/adverb forms (cheaper, more affordable). Limit answer to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper and more convenient for short trips. For example, many people use motorcycles or bicycles to commute to work or run errands in crowded cities.

× No, I do not have a bike when I was a child because most of most of the time I spend in playing outdoor activities.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because most of the time I spent playing outdoor activities.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'did not have' to match the time. 'Most of most of the time' is redundant; keep one 'most of the time.' 'I spend' should be past 'I spent.' Also 'in playing' is unnecessary; use 'spent playing.' Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent with the time frame (past) and remove redundancy.

× Yes, the bikes are popular in my country because people like to travel on bikes and bikes are more cheaper as compared to other travelling system.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because people like to travel by bike and bikes are cheaper compared to other means of transport.

Use general plural 'bikes' without 'the' when speaking generally. 'Travel on bikes' is awkward; use 'travel by bike' or 'travel by bicycle.' 'More cheaper' is incorrect; 'cheaper' already expresses comparison, so drop 'more.' 'Other travelling system' is uncountable/awkward; use 'other means of transport' or 'other transport systems.' Suggestion: remove unnecessary definite article, correct comparative form, and use natural collocations ('travel by bike', 'means of transport').