Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner's question and shows confusion. For Part 1 you must answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use linking words when adding detail. Also correct grammar and include specific information (e.g., age, type of bike, how you used it).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used it to ride around my neighbourhood every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to ride safely and then removed them after a few months.

제안: The answer repeats the examiner's question and contains grammar errors (“bike are proper”). Instead, state your opinion directly, then support it with one or two specific reasons and a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'however'). Use vocabulary relevant to popularity (commute, recreation, infrastructure).

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. However, their popularity varies by city since larger cities with bike lanes see more cyclists than rural areas.

× Did you have a bike when you were a?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student omitted the noun 'child' leaving the sentence incomplete and causing a sentence structure error (missing required noun). Replace the placeholder with the correct noun to complete the clause and match the examiner's question; ensure the time reference 'when you were a child' is used. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Do you think bike are proper in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

There are two issues: 'bike' is singular but context requires plural 'bikes' to refer to bicycles in general, causing a subject-verb agreement/number issue; 'are proper' is incorrect word choice for popularity. The correct verb 'are' remains with plural 'bikes', and 'popular' is the appropriate adjective. Use 'bikes are popular' or the question form 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' to match the examiner's intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:27