Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, verb tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, use past tense consistently, and add one brief supporting detail (e.g., who gave it to you or how you used it). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was three years old, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I used it every weekend to ride around the park and learn balance with training wheels.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice, make the opinion clear and add specific reasons or examples using linking words. Use plural forms and smoother connectors like 'because' or 'for example.' Limit to up to five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and good for health. For example, many people cycle to work or school to save money and to get exercise, and cities have been improving bike lanes to encourage more cycling.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was three years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was three years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was three years old'. This is a tense consistency error. Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense for actions completed in the past (I had a bike when I was three).

× Yes, I think bike is most pub is popular in my country because cycling can improve human health and well-being.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are most popular in my country because cycling can improve people's health and well-being.

There are multiple errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to refer generally to the mode of transport; 'is most pub is popular' appears garbled—use 'are most popular' or 'are very popular'; 'human health' is grammatical but awkward in everyday speech—'people's health' is more natural. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'bikes' requires plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: simplify to 'bikes are popular' or 'bikes are the most popular' depending on intended meaning.