Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, fluency and structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense (past simple) and avoid fillers. Add one or two specific supporting details with linking words to make the answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six years old, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. Because it was small and light, I learned to balance quickly and soon became confident riding longer distances.

제안: Make the answer more specific and natural by giving reasons and examples using linking words. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with specific evidence and a brief explanation.

예시: Yes, I do. Bicycles are very popular in my city because many people find them cheaper and faster for short trips. For example, most of my friends cycle to university daily, and there are also many bike lanes that make riding safer.