Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "never used" and "never tried" convey the same idea). Also correct informal contraction "'cause" to "because" in formal speaking. Add a specific reason or short example to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I rarely used it because I was afraid of falling and preferred walking to my friends' houses. For example, I usually walked to school with my sister, so I didn't get much chance to ride.

제안: Make the answer more natural and specific. Begin with a direct opinion, then provide two concise, linked reasons or examples. Avoid repetitive phrases like "bikers... biking a lot." Use linking words (for example, moreover) and include a concrete example or context (commuting, sport, leisure).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances, and there are also weekend cycling groups that train on local roads, so you often see cyclists during mornings and evenings.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I never used it 'cause I never tried.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I never used it because I never tried to ride it.

The original sentence omits the verb phrase that specifies what the student never tried to do. The phrase 'tried' requires a complement such as 'to ride it' (infinitive) or 'riding it' (gerund) depending on meaning. Also, avoid informal contraction ' 'cause' in formal responses; use 'because'. Suggestion: add 'to ride it' to make the action clear and use 'because' for formality.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because I've seen a lot of bikers in the road biking a lot.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because I've seen a lot of bikers on the road riding a lot.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'the road'; the correct preposition is 'on' for surfaces like roads. Also 'biking a lot' is awkward after 'bikers' — use 'riding a lot' or simply 'riding' to describe their activity. Suggestion: use 'on the road' and 'riding' to improve naturalness and correctness.