Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and varied. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and tense mistakes (use past tense for past events).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that I loved, and I often rode it with friends around the local park. For example, we would race each other on weekends and stop at a café afterward, which made those afternoons very memorable.

제안: Give a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Use accurate vocabulary (transportation, not 'trans'). Avoid filler words and repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many children and adults use them not only for transportation but also for exercise and leisure. Additionally, in many cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, which encourage more people to cycle.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Pay attention to time markers like 'when I was a child' and use past tense verbs accordingly.

× When I was a child I completely enjoying riding it with my friends and then we go around the park and we and my friends are enjoying it a lot.

✓ When I was a child I completely enjoyed riding it with my friends; we would go around the park and we enjoyed it a lot.

Multiple issues: 'completely enjoying' is incorrect because the action refers to a past habitual or completed activity—use past simple 'enjoyed' (Grammar problem type 8 and 6). 'We go around the park' should be past tense 'we would go' or 'we went' to match the past context (present tense error, type 6). Repetition 'we and my friends' is redundant. Suggestion: Use past simple or 'would' for repeated past actions and avoid redundant phrases.

× we and my friends are enjoying it a lot.

✓ my friends and I enjoyed it a lot.

Pronoun order and case: 'we and my friends' is awkward; use 'my friends and I' as the subject. Also 'are enjoying' is present continuous; since the context is past, use past 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: Place 'I' last in a compound subject and match verb tense to context.

× Yes, I think bicycles are popular in our country uh because many of my many of kids and adults use bicycles not for only part form of trans transportation but but for enjoyment and hobby.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in our country because many children and adults use them not only for transportation but also for enjoyment and as a hobby.

Several errors: 'many of my many of kids' is ungrammatical and redundant—use 'many children' or 'many kids' (pronoun/quantifier issue, types 12 and 14). 'Use bicycles not for only part form of trans transportation' is incorrect word order and word choice—should be 'not only for transportation' (article and word order issues, types 22 and 26). Repetition 'but but' and missing 'also'—add 'also' for correct correlative structure 'not only... but also...'. Use 'use them' to avoid repeating 'bicycles' (pronoun). Suggestion: Use clear subject nouns, correct correlative conjunctions, and concise phrasing.