Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb tense and plural errors (e.g., 'cycling' not 'cyclings', 'I loved' not 'I love').

예시: Yes, I did. I loved riding a bicycle as a child because it let me explore my neighborhood. For example, I often rode to the park with friends, and I particularly enjoyed the feeling of the wind on my face when cycling along tree-lined streets.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific, coherent reasons. Remove hesitations and fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'in my country', 'there weren't many cars', 'people love going to many places'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many streets are crowded and public transport can be expensive. For example, when I was young there were fewer cars, so people often walked or cycled to work and school, which made cycling a common and practical choice.

× Yes I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

Missing comma after introductory interjection 'Yes'. Add comma for correct punctuation; does not change tense or meaning.

× I am the one who loves cyclings.

✓ I am the one who loves cycling.

Incorrect plural form 'cyclings' — 'cycling' is an uncountable noun when referring to the activity. Use singular uncountable form 'cycling'.

× When I was a child I love going outside and doing some activity outside.

✓ When I was a child I loved going outside and doing outdoor activities.

Tense inconsistency: main clause is past ('When I was a child') so the verb should be past tense 'loved' not present 'love'. Also 'doing some activity outside' is awkward; use plural 'outdoor activities' for natural phrasing.

× One of my favorite is cyclings because while I were I was cycling along the way I really enjoyed the wind blowing to my face.

✓ One of my favorites is cycling because while I was cycling along the road I really enjoyed the wind blowing on my face.

Multiple issues: 'favorite' should be plural 'favorites' after 'one of'; 'cyclings' wrong — use 'cycling' (uncountable); 'while I were' wrong subject-verb agreement — use 'I was'; 'along the way' is vague, 'along the road' is more natural; 'blowing to my face' should be 'blowing on my face'. Corrections address article/number, verb agreement, noun form, and preposition use.

× Yes, I do because in my countries, umm, when I was a child, they're, they're not lots of car on the street.

✓ Yes, I do, because in my country when I was a child there were not a lot of cars on the streets.

Several mistakes: 'countries' should be singular 'country' if referring to the speaker's nation; tense consistency uses past 'when I was a child' so use 'there were' not contracted 'they're'; 'not lots of car' should be 'not a lot of cars' or 'few cars' and plural 'cars'; 'on the street' -> 'on the streets' for general statement. Also remove filler 'umm'.

× So people loves goats many places by walking and also by, uh, riding a bicycle.

✓ So people love to go to many places by walking and also by riding a bicycle.

Errors: 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with plural subject 'people' (subject-verb agreement). 'goats' is a misspelling of 'go to' merged as 'goats' — correct to 'go to'. Remove filler 'uh'. The phrase 'riding a bicycle' is acceptable; alternatively 'riding bicycles' or 'by bicycle' are natural.