Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Sua resposta não responde diretamente à pergunta e está confusa. Dê uma sentença-tópico clara (sim/não) seguida por 1–2 frases de suporte com detalhes específicos (por exemplo, quando você tinha a bicicleta, onde a usava, por que gostava). Use conectores simples para coerência. Mantenha no máximo 5 frases e evite frases irrelevantes.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight and used it to ride to school and to visit friends. I especially liked racing with my neighbors because it was exciting and kept me active.

제안: A resposta é direta, mas muito curta e sem suporte. Acrescente 1–2 frases com detalhes específicos e conectores (por exemplo, onde são populares, quem as usa, motivos para a popularidade). Use vocabulário relevante como “commuting”, “environmentally friendly”, ou “cycling lanes”.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially in urban areas. Many people use bicycles for commuting because traffic is heavy and cycling lanes are widely available, and some also choose bikes for fitness and environmental reasons.

× For the team, obviously glad that one was Sergius.

✓ For me, I was obviously glad that it was Sergius.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and missing subject and verb, making it unclear. 'For the team' is likely intended to be 'For me' or 'As for me'; 'obviously glad' needs a subject and a verb ('I was obviously glad'); 'that one was Sergius' is unnatural in this context and should be 'that it was Sergius.' Suggestion: include a clear subject and verb, use 'for me' to express personal preference, and reorder the clause to follow English subject-verb-object patterns.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'bikes' is informal; to be slightly more formal and match exam register, use 'bicycles.' No tense change is required because the present simple 'think' and 'are' correctly express a general fact. Suggestion: prefer 'bicycles' in formal speech; otherwise the sentence is correct.