Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response did not answer the examiner's question and repeated a different word, causing confusion. To improve, listen carefully and reply directly to the question asked. Give a short topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, how often you rode it, who taught you) using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven, and I rode it to school most days with my friends. Because my parents lived nearby, I often practised in the park, which helped me become confident on the road.

제안: Your answer mistakenly replaced the subject 'bikes' with 'bags,' so the response was irrelevant. Focus on the question's topic and give a clear opinion followed by specific reasons or examples. Use a linking word (e.g., because, therefore, for example) to connect your opinion and supporting details, and avoid one-word answers when possible.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling to work, and there are several bike-sharing schemes that make riding convenient.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student answered with 'bag' but the examiner asked about 'bike'; this is a lexical/context error rather than grammatical. It should match the examiner's noun to answer the question correctly. Suggestion: listen to the question and repeat or use the same noun if referring to the same thing; if you meant a different item, explicitly state the difference, e.g., 'No, I didn't have a bike; I had a bag.'

× Yes, I think the bags are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The examiner asked about 'bikes' but the student replied with 'bags', creating a mismatch in meaning. This is a lexical/context error rather than a grammar-rule error from the provided list, but it must be corrected to fit the question. Suggestion: use the same noun as in the question when answering directly; if comparing items, clarify: 'Bikes are more popular than bags.'