Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、時制の一致や文章の構造を改善するとより自然になります。具体的には: 1) 過去の話題なので現在形（"do"／"have"）ではなく過去形（"did"／"had"）を使う。2) トピックセンテンスを明確にして、補足情報は接続詞や副詞（"often", "usually"）でつなぐ。3) 文を2〜3文に分けて自然に詳述する。例: "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to go to the nearest park almost every day."

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the nearest park to play with my friends, and sometimes I used it to run small errands for my parents.

제안: 内容は伝わりますが、発言の流れと語彙・文法の正確さを改善してください。具体的には: 1) 不適切な表現（"transporting method"、末尾の不完全な文）を避ける。適切な語彙は"mode of transport"や"popular"。2) 話の理由を示すときは接続詞（"because"の後は完全な文）を用いる。3) 口語的な間投詞（"you know"）を控えめにするか削除する。4) 2〜3文で簡潔に述べる。

예시: I don't think so, at least not in Tokyo. The train network here is very efficient, so most people prefer public transport to cycling. As a result, bicycles are less common as a daily mode of transport.

× Yes I do, I have a bike and used it to go to the nearest park often.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike and used it to go to the nearest park often.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Yes I do' is present tense; change to 'Yes, I did.' 'I have a bike' should be 'I had a bike.' Keep 'used it to go' as past tense. Also add a comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: Match verb tenses to the time frame stated in the question by using past tense forms for events in the past.

× I don't think so. Especially in Tokyo bike is not a popular transporting method because you know, transportation system of train is well developed here in Tokyo and most people do not have to use bike to.

✓ I don't think so. Especially in Tokyo, bikes are not a popular means of transport because the train transportation system is well developed here and most people do not have to use bikes.

Several issues: pronoun/word form and countability. 'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'Transporting method' is unnatural; use 'means of transport.' 'Transportation system of train' should be 'the train transportation system' or simply 'the train system.' 'Use bike to' is ungrammatical; say 'use bikes.' Also add a comma after 'Tokyo.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements, choose natural collocations ('means of transport'/'train system'), and ensure verbs or nouns are not left incomplete.