Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly fuller but concise response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail or short anecdote using a linking word. Avoid vague words like "vehicle" and replace with more natural terms (e.g., "bike" or "tricycle"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and vary vocabulary.

예시: Yes — I had a four-wheeled bike when I was a child, and it was my favourite. Because it felt very stable, I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon, which made playing outside much easier and more fun.

제안: Answer directly then support with one or two specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Use more natural collocations (e.g., "people cycle" or "bikes are common") and avoid formal phrases like "this vehicle". Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, commuters often cycle to work to save money and stay fit.

× Yes, I had a four wheel bike when I was a child and it was my favorite vehicle because of its convenience.

✓ Yes, I had a four-wheel bike when I was a child, and it was my favorite vehicle because of its convenience.

The original sentence has a punctuation issue and a compound adjective needing a hyphen: 'four wheel' should be 'four-wheel' because two words together modify 'bike' (compound adjective). Also, add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use hyphens for compound adjectives before nouns and place a comma between two independent clauses.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and many cyclists use this vehicle to maintain their active lifestyle and overall well-being.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, and many cyclists use them to maintain an active lifestyle and overall well-being.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the singular pronoun 'this vehicle' to refer back to the plural noun 'bikes'; this is a pronoun agreement issue. Replace with the plural pronoun 'them'. Also, 'their active lifestyle' is plural possessive matching 'cyclists', but 'an active lifestyle' is more natural general phrasing; either 'their active lifestyles' or 'an active lifestyle' is correct. Additionally, add a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent and keep consistent noun phrasing for clarity.'