Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons or a short example. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I didn't have' not 'I don't have') and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a busy city and we mainly used buses. As a result, I never learned to ride properly, although I sometimes rode small scooters with my friends.

제안: Begin with a direct opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat) and follow with a specific reason and brief supporting detail. Use correct subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'bikes aren't popular' or 'bikes are not very popular') and clearer vocabulary (not 'backers'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'because of' and give an example or contrast. Keep it natural and avoid hesitations.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport for long commutes. For example, in cities with heavy traffic, few people cycle regularly, so biking is mainly a leisure activity.

× OK, if I totally distress, I don't uh have a bike when my childhood because I don't interested in.

✓ OK, when I was a child I didn't have a bike because I wasn't interested in them.

Problems: mixture of inappropriate tense and word choice, and incorrect pronoun/reference. 'If I totally distress' is meaningless here; likely intended 'when I was a child' so use past tense. 'I don't uh have a bike when my childhood' mixes present 'don't have' with 'my childhood'—use past: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' 'I don't interested in' uses incorrect verb form and auxiliary—should be 'I wasn't interested in' (past passive/adjective with be + adjective). Also refer to bikes as plural 'them' or repeat 'bikes'. Suggestions: use simple past throughout for past-time statements ('was', 'didn't have', 'wasn't interested in') and ensure correct verb forms after auxiliaries ('wasn't interested in' not 'don't interested in').

× I think backers, uh, doesn't uh, popular in my country because, uh, many people doesn't use bikes.

✓ I think bikes aren't very popular in my country because many people don't use them.

Problems: 'backers' is likely a mispronunciation/misspelling of 'bikes'. 'doesn't popular' is ungrammatical—'popular' is an adjective and needs a form of 'be': 'isn't popular' (third person singular); with plural 'bikes' use 'aren't popular'. 'many people doesn't use' shows subject-verb agreement error: plural subject 'people' requires 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also use pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'bikes' or repeat 'bikes'. Suggestions: use correct noun 'bikes', match verb 'be' or auxiliary to subject number ('bikes aren't', 'people don't'), and keep consistent plural references ('them').