Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors; use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct possessive and article use (e.g., "my friend's house"). Avoid repetition of the same idea. Add a brief reflection or specific detail to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it to my friend's house every afternoon. For example, I practiced in the park until I could ride without training wheels, which made me feel very proud.

제안: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No or Partly) with a reason using linking words, and provide specific examples or comparisons. Correct grammatical mistakes and avoid repetition. Structure: topic sentence + reason + brief example or consequence. Use vocabulary like 'dominant', 'private cars', 'public transport', 'cycling infrastructure'.

예시: Not really. Cars are dominant in my country, so most people travel by private car rather than by bicycle. For instance, there are few bike lanes in cities, which makes cycling less safe and less common.

× Yes I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses the auxiliary 'did' for past simple. Short affirmative answers use the auxiliary 'did' plus base verb (did) or short 'yes' plus subject and auxiliary. Saying 'Yes I had.' is grammatically odd because the expected short answer is 'Yes, I did.' Use 'Yes, I did.' or the full sentence 'Yes, I had a bike.'; include a comma after 'Yes'.

× I used to ride it to my friend house every afternoon and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

✓ I used to ride it to my friend's house every afternoon, and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

Two issues: possession requires the possessive form 'friend's' not 'friend', which is not in the provided list except closest is possessive handled under pronouns/adjectives but treat as adjective error; however this fits 'Verb + -ing form' because 'practicing' is fine. Main correction adds the possessive and a comma before 'and'. Explanation: use the possessive 'friend's house' to show ownership; add a comma to separate clauses. Suggestion: write 'my friend's house' and punctuate compound sentences with a comma before the coordinating conjunction when linking two independent clauses.

× No, it's because my country.

✓ No, I don't think so because in my country, most people travel by car.

The original reply is an incomplete and unclear sentence. It tries to explain why bikes are not popular but lacks a proper structure and verb. Provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question and gives reason. Suggestion: use a clear negative opinion 'I don't think so' then give the reason 'because in my country, most people travel by car.'

× The move, the most of the the move of the traffic way is is the car, yes.

✓ Most traffic is made up of cars.

This sentence is ungrammatical and contains repetition ('the move', 'the the', 'is is') and awkward phrasing. A concise correction is 'Most traffic is made up of cars.' Explanation: use 'most traffic' as the subject and a clear verb phrase 'is made up of' or 'consists of' to describe composition. Suggestion: avoid repeating words and use simple, direct vocabulary: 'Most people use cars' or 'Cars make up most of the traffic.'