Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar: say “Yes, I did” or “Yes, I had one.” Clarify the activity: “ride my bike in the park” rather than “ride a park a bike.” Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike, and I used to ride it in the local park every weekend because I liked exploring the paths and feeling free.

제안: Avoid fillers (uh, umm) and be precise. Give a direct topic sentence, then give a reason and an example using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Use correct comparisons: “prefer cars to bikes.” Keep it within 1–3 sentences and use context vocabulary like “private cars,” “public transport,” or “infrastructure.”

예시: Not really. Bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer private cars for convenience and there is limited cycling infrastructure, for example few bike lanes in cities.

× Yes I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the simple past and uses the auxiliary did. Short affirmative answers to yes/no past questions typically use 'Yes, I did' rather than 'Yes I had.' Use the auxiliary did for correct past simple responses; include a comma after Yes for punctuation clarity.

× I used to ride a park a bike every weekend.

✓ I used to ride a bike in a park every weekend.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an extra article: 'ride a park a bike' is ungrammatical. Use 'ride a bike in a park' to show location. 'Used to' correctly indicates a past habitual action; ensure proper placement of articles and prepositions.

× Uh, they are not that popular actually.

✓ Uh, they are not that popular, actually.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but benefits from a comma before 'actually' for clarity. Subject-verb agreement is correct ('they are'); the suggestion improves punctuation and naturalness.

× I guess umm, people umm, prefer to use uh, their uh, personal cars than bike.

✓ I guess, umm, people prefer to use their personal cars rather than bikes.

Comparisons with 'rather than' require parallel noun forms: use 'cars rather than bikes' (plural) or 'a car rather than a bike'. Also remove redundant 'to use' split by hesitations; keep 'their personal cars' and make 'bike' plural to match 'cars'. Punctuation and filler words can be reduced for clarity.