Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, mạo từ, danh từ số nhiều), phát âm một số từ và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: dùng thì quá khứ đơn chính xác (I had), dùng mạo từ và danh từ số nhiều khi cần (a bike, my two cousins), sửa động từ và giới từ (ride a bike, with my family and my two cousins), tránh từ thừa hoặc sai (usually → used to hoặc when I was five). Thêm liên từ ngắn để mạch văn hơn và giữ câu ngắn gọn (1-3 câu).

예시: I had a bike when I was five. I loved riding it with my family and my two cousins, and we often spent time riding together in the park near our house.

제안: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp số ít/ số nhiều (Vietnamese people, not person), trật tự từ và cách diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn. Dùng câu mở đầu trực tiếp (Yes, I think...), cung cấp lý do cụ thể và sắp xếp logic bằng liên từ (because, so). Tránh dịch sát tiếng Việt; dùng cụm từ tự nhiên như enjoy exercising, often cycle around their neighborhood. Giữ tối đa 3 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng và có liên kết.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Vietnam because many people use cycling as a form of exercise and transport. People often ride around their neighborhood or to meet friends, especially in smaller towns and cities.

× I usually have a buy when I was five years old.

✓ I usually had a bike when I was five years old.

The noun 'bike' (and 'cousin' later) should match singular/plural forms and the verb 'have' must match past tense. 'Have' should be 'had' for past tense; 'bike' is singular and 'a bike' is the correct noun. Suggestion: use 'had a bike' to indicate possession in the past.

× I usually have a buy when I was five years old.

✓ I usually had a bike when I was five years old.

The student used 'have' which is a present-tense form while the time marker 'when I was five years old' requires past tense. Use the past simple 'had'. Also 'buy' is a wrong word form likely intended as 'bike'. Suggestion: ensure verb tense matches time expressions and check word choice.

× I really like riding bike with my family and my two cousin.

✓ I really liked riding my bike with my family and my two cousins.

Use 'liked' to match past timeframe, 'riding my bike' includes the possessive determiner, and 'two cousins' must be plural. Suggestion: match verb tense to past and use possessive adjectives and correct plural nouns.

× I really like riding bike with my family and my two cousin.

✓ I really liked riding my bike with my family and my two cousins.

The noun 'cousin' must be plural 'cousins' when referring to two people. Also 'bike' usually takes an article or possessive ('my bike'). Suggestion: use plural forms for counts greater than one and include articles/possessives for nouns.

× I really like riding bike with my family and my two cousin.

✓ I really liked riding my bike with my family and my two cousins.

The speaking refers to a past habit, so 'like' should be 'liked'. Suggestion: use past simple for habitual actions in the past.

× We spent a lot of time riding together in our park or just nearby our house.

✓ We spent a lot of time riding together in the park or just near our house.

Use 'in the park' or 'at the park' depending on reference; 'nearby our house' is incorrect—use 'near our house' or 'nearby our house' is ungrammatical. Also include definite article 'the' for 'park' if it's a specific park. Suggestion: use 'in the park' and 'near our house'.

× Of course yes, because Vietnamese person are very healthy, they stay healthily in every day and they love doing sport, exercise and mostly out my neighborhood or my friends they.

✓ Of course, because Vietnamese people are generally healthy; they stay healthy every day, they love doing sports and exercising, and they often go out in my neighborhood with friends.

Multiple issues: 'person' should be plural 'people' for generalization; 'are' is fine with plural; 'stay healthily' is incorrect—use the adjective 'healthy' not adverb; 'every day' is two words and 'doing sport' should be 'doing sports' or 'playing sports'; word order 'mostly out my neighborhood or my friends they' is ungrammatical—rephrase to 'often go out in my neighborhood with friends'. Suggestion: use plural 'people', adjective 'healthy', correct collocations 'do sports' and clear word order.

× Of course yes, because Vietnamese person are very healthy, they stay healthily in every day and they love doing sport, exercise and mostly out my neighborhood or my friends they.

✓ Of course, because Vietnamese people are generally healthy; they stay healthy every day, they love doing sports and exercising, and they often go out in my neighborhood with friends.

The phrase 'my friends they' redundantly repeats the subject. Remove redundant pronoun and keep correct object phrase 'with friends'. Suggestion: avoid repeating subjects and use proper prepositions ('with friends').

× they stay healthily in every day

✓ they stay healthy every day

Use the adjective 'healthy' after a linking verb like 'stay', not the adverb 'healthily'. Also 'every day' is the correct form for the time expression. Suggestion: use adjective after linking verbs and separate 'every day' into two words.

× they love doing sport, exercise

✓ they love doing sports and exercising

Use parallel gerunds: 'doing sports' and 'exercising' are natural collocations. 'Sport' as uncountable is less common here; plural 'sports' fits general activities. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and common collocations.