Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect words. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details (specific memory, age, or reason). Keep it natural, avoid repetition, and limit to no more than five sentences. Use linking words like “and” or “because” to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because there were few parks nearby, I practiced on quiet side streets until I felt confident riding on busier roads.

제안: Your answer communicates an idea but is disfluent and vague. Begin with a clear opinion (yes/no/partly), then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” and “however”). Avoid filler words (uh, um) and vague phrasing like “that is inappropriate.” Be concise and provide a brief example or consequence.

예시: Not really — bicycles are not very popular in my country because heavy traffic makes cycling dangerous and many cities lack safe bicycle lanes. For example, I rarely see adults cycling to work, and most people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience.

× Hi. Hi, I have good night abide when I was a child.

✓ Hi. I had a good bicycle when I was a child.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains incorrect vocabulary ('good night abide') that does not convey the intended meaning. This is a sentence structure and word-choice error. The question asks about having a bike in childhood, so use past tense 'had' for possession in the past and the noun 'bicycle' (or 'bike'). Suggestion: replace the nonsense phrase with 'a good bicycle' and use past tense: 'I had a good bicycle when I was a child.' Use simple past for past life events.

× Uh bikes are quite not popular in my country due to the umm uh, traffic congestion and also the bicycle lanes. That is inappropriate.

✓ Uh, bikes are not very popular in my country due to traffic congestion and the lack of bicycle lanes.

The original sentence has awkward and incorrect adverb/adjective ordering ('quite not popular') and redundancy. 'Quite not' is not natural; use 'not very' or 'not particularly' instead. Also 'the bicycle lanes. That is inappropriate.' is unclear — likely intended meaning is there is a lack of bicycle lanes. Use 'the lack of bicycle lanes' to clearly express that absence. Remove filler sounds (umm, uh) in formal speech. Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural adverb placement: 'bikes are not very popular'.