Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is largely unintelligible and does not directly respond to the question. Aim to give a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then 1–2 supporting details about the bike (what kind, who gave it, how you used it). Use simple correct grammar and keep to no more than five sentences. Include linking words if you give additional details (for example: because, so, when, and).

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my fifth birthday, and it was a small red bike with training wheels. I used to ride it every day in the neighborhood because I loved being outdoors and playing with friends.

제안: The answer is unclear and does not address popularity. Start with a direct opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat), then give 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and relevant vocabulary (transport, commute, exercise, environment). Keep sentences short and grammatical.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes and exercise because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and office workers often ride bicycles to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I am applying when I was when I'm teacher despite sports by now. Harding for my five years birthday.

✓ Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. I received it for my fifth birthday.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains multiple issues: incorrect tense usage, wrong word choices, and broken sentence structure. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). The corrected version uses simple past tense 'had' and 'received' which match the past time reference 'when I was a child' and 'for my fifth birthday'. Suggestions: keep one clear main clause per idea, use correct past tense for past events, and replace unknown or incorrect words (e.g., 'applying', 'Harding') with appropriate verbs like 'had' and 'received'.

× Share buying company from people to the bicycle to ride to airplane.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular because many people buy them to ride for short trips and commuting.

The original sentence is incoherent and mixes unrelated words, so it is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The corrected sentence expresses a clear idea: popularity of bicycles and reasons people buy them. Suggestions: form a subject ('bicycles'), use a linking verb ('are'), provide reasons with clear clauses ('because many people buy them to ride for short trips and commuting'), and avoid unrelated nouns ('company', 'airplane') unless clarifying contrast.