Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but slightly long and could be more natural with a concise topic sentence followed by one supporting detail. Avoid repeating similar ideas (e.g., "couldn't afford" and "luxury") and limit to at most 3–4 short sentences. Add a brief personal feeling or consequence to enrich content.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My family couldn't afford one, so we focused on essentials like food and school supplies. As a result, I often walked to school, which made me more independent.

제안: Your answer gives reasons but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two linked, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "and", "also"). Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid sentence fragments. Expand one reason with a concrete example or brief comparison.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, many people cycle short distances to work since bikes are low-maintenance and produce no air pollution, which helps reduce traffic congestion in cities.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford to buy one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford to buy one.

This sentence is grammatically correct for the past tense context; no change needed. The speaker appropriately uses the past simple ('didn't have') and modal in the past ('couldn't afford'). Ensure consistency in past-tense narration.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because it's easy to use and it reduces air pollutions and. Low maintenance.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are easy to use, they reduce air pollution, and they are low maintenance.

Errors corrected: subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference, countable/uncountable noun form, sentence fragmentation. 'Bikes' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb forms ('are', 'reduce'). 'Air pollution' is an uncountable noun (not 'pollutions'). The original had a sentence fragment 'and. Low maintenance.' which must be combined into the sentence as 'and they are low maintenance.' Suggestions: match pronouns and verbs to the subject number, use uncountable noun forms for mass nouns, and avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each clause has a subject and verb.