Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and relevant, but could be improved by adding a brief supporting detail and using a slightly more natural phrasing. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Use one linking phrase to expand, for example mention how that affected you or what you used instead.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school and sometimes shared a neighbour's bike, which made me value small acts of kindness.

제안: The answer addresses the question but has hesitations, repetition, and awkward phrasing. Make the statement concise, remove fillers (uh, um), avoid repeating phrases, and add a specific reason or brief comparison using a linking word (e.g., however, although) to support your view.

예시: Yes, bicycles are still very popular in my country; however, car ownership has been increasing recently because more people can afford four-wheelers and roads have improved.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one.

The original sentence uses 'it' to refer to 'a bike'; using 'one' is more natural and correct for replacing a singular count noun previously mentioned. Change improves clarity and idiomatic usage. Suggestion: replace vague pronoun 'it' with 'one' when referring back to a non-specific countable noun.

× Yes, bikes are very, very popular in my current in my country, but uh, there are also cases, uh, right now the four Wheelers are also getting popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are very, very popular in my country, but right now four-wheelers are also becoming more popular.

The original sentence has repetition ('in my current in my country'), filler words ('uh'), awkward phrase 'there are also cases', inconsistent capitalization ('Wheelers'), and mixed verb choice. Corrections: remove redundancy, eliminate fillers, replace 'there are also cases' with a clearer contrast clause, use 'becoming more popular' for natural present continuous change, and use lowercase with a hyphen for 'four-wheelers'. Suggestion: keep sentences concise, avoid filler words, and choose consistent, idiomatic expressions to describe trends.