Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one brief supporting detail. Use correct past tense and possessive forms (e.g. "my older brother"). Avoid extra words. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My older brother did have one, and I sometimes rode it with him when he let me.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific. Begin with a direct answer, then give one or two concise reasons using correct expressions (e.g. "bring joy" rather than "gives people a dopamine"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines because they are an affordable and healthy way to get around. For example, many children enjoy riding bikes for fun, and adults use them for short commutes.

× No I didn't, but my kuya have had it.

✓ No, I didn't, but my kuya had one.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement and verb form issue. 'Kuya' (he) requires the singular past form 'had' rather than 'have had' here. Also 'have had' is present perfect and awkward with 'No I didn't', which is simple past; keep consistent tense and use a clear noun 'one' for 'a bike'. Suggestion: use simple past 'had' to match the question about childhood and ensure the verb agrees with the singular subject.

× Bikes are popular in my country because it gives people a dopamine of happiness, especially the children.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because they give people a feeling of happiness, especially children.

Pronoun and verb agreement plus word choice issue: 'Bikes' is plural so use 'they' and plural verb 'give' (subject-verb agreement). 'Gives people a dopamine of happiness' is unnatural: 'dopamine' is a neurotransmitter and should not be used with 'a'. Better to use 'a feeling of happiness' or 'a dopamine boost' if referring to biology. Also 'the children' is unnecessary; use 'children' for general reference. Suggestion: use 'they give people a feeling of happiness' or 'they give people a dopamine boost' for clearer, natural phrasing.