Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct singular/plural and article forms, and add one brief supporting detail (where or how you used it) using a linking word. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and around the neighborhood, so it helped me get more exercise and independence.

제안: Make the response grammatically correct and more coherent. Begin with a direct answer, then add a clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words (e.g., however, although) and correct verb forms and nouns. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. However, older people tend to avoid cycling due to safety concerns and mobility issues.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The noun 'children' is plural while the subject refers to a single speaker at a single age. Use the singular form 'child' to match the singular subject. Suggestion: choose singular or plural noun to match the context (I was a child / We were children).

× Especially in my country, the people are riding bike a lot, but when it comes to elderly people, they don't ride back.

✓ Especially in my country, people ride bikes a lot, but when it comes to elderly people, they don't ride them anymore.

There are two issues: 1) Article/number: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' because it refers to people riding bicycles in general; no definite article 'the' is needed before 'people' (use just 'people' rather than 'the people') . 2) Verb phrasing: 'are riding' is present continuous implying an action happening now; use simple present 'ride' for habitual actions. Also 'don't ride back' is unnatural — use 'don't ride them anymore' or 'no longer ride' to express elderly people no longer ride bicycles. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, plural for countable nouns, and a clear phrase for cessation such as 'no longer' or 'anymore'.