Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one brief supporting detail. Correct grammar (use articles and tense) and avoid confusing phrases like "when I was outside." Use linking words if adding detail.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bicycle when I was very young. However, I bought/received one when I was in eighth grade, and it helped me travel to school more easily.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and informal fillers ("like", "anything"). Use singular/plural consistently and correct word order. Mention specific reasons (cost, traffic, fuel) to make your answer concrete.

예시: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country because they are cheaper to buy and easier to park. For example, many families own at least one motorcycle, and people prefer them for short trips and commuting in heavy traffic.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was outside, but I got bicycle when I was studying at class 8.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was young, but I got a bicycle when I was in class 8.

The phrase 'when I was outside' is incorrect for indicating childhood time; use 'when I was young' or specify age. Also 'studying at class 8' uses wrong preposition; the correct preposition is 'in' for classes ('in class 8'). Use the article 'a' before 'bicycle'. Suggestion: say 'when I was young' or 'when I was in eighth grade' and include 'a bicycle'.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was outside, but I got bicycle when I was studying at class 8.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was young, but I got a bicycle when I was in class 8.

The noun 'bicycle' needs an indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular, countable noun introduced for the first time. Also 'bike' earlier is fine with 'a bike'. Suggestion: always use 'a' or 'an' with singular countable nouns unless a determiner is present.

× Yes I think bikes are more popular in my country than other vehicles like car or Jeep or anything like everyone.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are more popular in my country than other vehicles such as cars or jeeps.

Compare general present facts using plural nouns for categories: 'cars' and 'jeeps' rather than singular 'car' or 'Jeep'. Also remove informal fillers like 'anything like everyone'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural comparative structure. Suggestion: use 'such as' and plural forms when comparing categories.

× Everyone has got like bike to ride in every home they they get 1 motorcycle.

✓ Almost every household has a motorcycle to ride.

The original sentence has subject-verb and noun number issues: 'Everyone has got like bike' is ungrammatical. 'Everyone' as subject can be used but 'has got like bike' is incorrect. It's more natural to say 'almost every household has a motorcycle' or 'most people have a motorcycle'. Also remove repeated words and numeric '1' in casual text. Suggestion: choose an appropriate subject ('every household' or 'most people') and use correct singular/plural nouns and verbs.

× Everyone has got like bike to ride in every home they they get 1 motorcycle.

✓ Most people have a motorcycle in each household.

The pronoun 'they' is repeated and the reference is unclear. Using 'everyone' with 'they' is acceptable in modern English but the sentence structure is awkward. Better to use 'most people' or 'each household' to make reference clear. Also avoid 'they they' repetition. Suggestion: rephrase to a clearer subject and singular/plural consistency.