Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”). Then give one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words (for example: “However, I plan to buy a sports bike in the future because I enjoy cycling and it is good exercise.”). Keep answers concise (maximum 3–4 sentences) and avoid irrelevant words. Practice correct verb forms (did/don’t, was/were, will/would) and vocabulary (bike, bicycle, sports bike).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I plan to buy a sports bike in the near future because I enjoy outdoor exercise and it is a convenient way to travel around my neighborhood. I hope to save money this year so I can buy one before summer.

제안: Answer directly and use clear, relevant details. Begin with a straightforward statement (e.g., “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country” or “No, they are not very popular.”). Then support your view with specific reasons or examples and linking words (for example: “Many people use bicycles for short commutes, especially students, but sports bikes are less common because they are expensive”). Avoid vague phrasing and incorrect words like “sports boys” — use “sporty bikes” or “sports bicycles” and correct grammar. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are popular in my country for everyday travel, especially among students and commuters. However, high-performance sports bikes are less common because they are expensive and mainly owned by enthusiasts.

× No, I don't have any advice when I was tired, but in future I thinking to buy a sports bike for me. So I wish that in future I will buy some sports back home.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but in the future I am planning to buy a sports bike for myself. I hope that I will bring a sports bike home in the future.

This sentence contains several problems that match the provided grammar categories: present/past tense confusion (6 and 5), incorrect verb form (8, 9, 10), incorrect pronoun use (12), and article/word choice issues (22). Specific issues: 'I don't have any advice when I was tired' mixes present simple with a past time reference; it should be past simple 'I didn't have a bike' to match the examiner's past-tense question. 'advice' is the wrong noun; context requires 'a bike'. 'in future I thinking to buy' uses incorrect tense and form: 'thinking' needs an auxiliary 'am' and 'in the future' requires 'the' and 'planning' or 'going to' is appropriate. 'for me' is unnatural; use 'for myself'. 'I wish that in future I will buy some sports back home' is awkward: 'wish' with a future fact is better as 'hope', 'some sports' is incorrect for 'a sports bike', and 'back home' should be 'home' or 'bring ... home'. Suggestions: use consistent past tense when referring to childhood, use 'the future' not 'in future', use correct verb forms 'am planning' or 'am going to', replace 'advice' with 'a bike', and use 'myself' as reflexive pronoun. Adjusted correction: 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but in the future I am planning to buy a sports bike for myself. I hope that I will bring a sports bike home in the future.'

× In my nation know according to my knowledge, any sports boys are not famous.

✓ In my country, as far as I know, sportsmen are not very famous.

This sentence has multiple problems matching sentence structure errors (26), incorrect word order/phrasing, and incorrect vocabulary/pronoun use (12, 13). 'In my nation know according to my knowledge' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'In my country, as far as I know' or 'According to my knowledge' alone. 'any sports boys' is incorrect English; likely intended 'sports boys' meaning 'athletes' or 'sportsmen'. Use 'sportsmen' or 'athletes'. 'are not famous' is fine but 'not very famous' sounds more natural. Suggestions: simplify the phrase to one standard expression for 'to my knowledge', use the correct noun 'athletes' or 'sportsmen', and place commas for clarity.