Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar and word-choice errors (e.g., use "ride" instead of "drive" for bicycles, avoid repeating phrases). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was 12. My father gave it to me so I could ride to school and save time, which was convenient because public transport was slow. I used it every day and it helped me be more independent.

제안: Answer directly, then add specific observations with linking words. Replace vague verbs ("bike" as a noun/verb confusion) with clearer phrasing like "people ride bikes" and avoid filler words ("uh"). Give one or two concrete examples or reasons to support your view.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. For example, many people ride bikes in parks and along the coastal roads on weekends, and I often see cycling groups training in the mornings because cycling is both a sport and a convenient way to get around.

× I had a bike when I was when I was 12 years old.

✓ I had a bike when I was 12 years old.

The sentence repeats 'when I was' causing redundancy. Remove the extra phrase to make a correct past-tense statement: 'I had a bike when I was 12 years old.' This keeps past tense consistent and concise.

× My father gave that to me because he wanted me to drive the bike from our home to the to the school because it saves me time and save.

✓ My father gave it to me because he wanted me to ride the bike from our home to school because it saved me time.

Multiple issues: use of 'that' for a bike is unnatural (use 'it'), 'drive the bike' should be 'ride the bike', duplicate 'to the', and tense inconsistency ('he wanted' is past so the result should be past: 'saved' not 'saves' or 'save'). Also 'to the school' can be simplified to 'to school'. Fixing these keeps subject-verb tense agreement and natural collocations.

× Definitely yes, because I saw a lot of bikes in my country during uh weekends.

✓ Definitely yes, because I see a lot of bikes in my country on weekends.

The question asks about general popularity (present), so use present simple 'see' instead of past 'saw'. Also use the preposition 'on weekends' for habitual actions. This fits the present-tense context.

× They usually bike in the park or or any coastal Rd.

✓ They usually ride bikes in the park or along any coastal road.

'Bike' as a verb is colloquial; 'ride bikes' or 'cycle' is more natural. Use 'ride bikes' and 'along' for 'coastal road'. Write 'road' in full and avoid repetition. Also standardized phrasing 'usually' + verb-ing corrected to base form 'ride' in present simple for habitual action.

× I saw it every day.

✓ I see them every day.

For a general habitual observation, use present simple 'see' not past 'saw'. Also 'bikes' is plural, so use 'them' instead of 'it'. Change ensures subject-verb tense consistency and correct pronoun reference.