Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp cơ bản và sắp xếp câu cho rõ ràng. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (ví dụ: "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child."), sau đó nêu chi tiết cụ thể (màu sắc, ai tặng, khi nào) trong 1-2 câu ngắn. Tránh lỗi động từ (have → had, buy → bought) và các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa (award you). Dùng liên từ đơn giản khi cần nối ý (e.g., "and", "because").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was yellow and black, and my parents bought it for me when I was seven. I loved riding it to the park every weekend because it was fast and light.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, dùng cấu trúc phù hợp cho ý kiến (e.g., "Yes, bikes are very popular in my country."). Tránh dùng các cụm từ không đúng ("I'd buy a popular", "go bye bye"). Bổ sung lý do cụ thể và ví dụ ngắn gọn (ví dụ: giao thông, giá rẻ, tiện lợi). Dùng liên từ để kết nối lý do (e.g., "because", "so").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and easy to park. For example, students and market sellers often ride bikes to work every day.

× Yes I have buy when I award you is a yellow and black.

✓ Yes, I bought one when I was a child; it was yellow and black.

The student mixed present perfect 'have' with base verb 'buy' and incorrect words 'award you is'. Use simple past 'bought' for a completed action in the past. Also provide proper past-time clause 'when I was a child' and correct description 'it was yellow and black'. Suggestion: use past simple for specific past events and keep clauses clear.

× Yes, I think I'd buy a popular.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular.

The original sentence has wrong structure and incorrect use of 'I'd buy a popular' (contraction 'I'd' = I would or I had) and missing noun. The question asks about general popularity, so use present simple: 'bicycles are popular'. Suggestion: state the subject (bicycles) and use present simple for general facts.

× In my country people know everyone go bye bye every day.

✓ In my country, people often go out by bike every day.

The sentence 'people know everyone go bye bye' is ungrammatical: wrong verbs and phrases. Use present simple 'people often go out by bike' for habitual actions. 'Go bye bye' is inappropriate informal phrase; replace with 'go out by bike'. Also add adverb 'often' to match frequency if intended. Suggestion: use clear vocabulary and present simple for routines.