Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and tense consistency, be more natural and concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then give one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and unnecessary words like filler 'uh'.

예시: Yes, I did. I had my brother’s old bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it to school every day until I was twelve.

제안: Use subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing. Give a concise topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Replace vague phrases with precise information and remove fillers.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because there are many bike-sharing stations in cities, so people can rent bicycles cheaply for short trips.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student answered with 'I have,' which is present tense and does not match the past context. Replace with 'I did' to agree with the past-tense question. Use past simple for completed past states: 'Yes, I did.'

× I have a bike when I was a child and it's actually my brother's old bicycle.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and it was actually my brother's old bicycle.

The student mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child.' Both verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistent time reference. Change 'have' to 'had' and 'it's' (it is) to 'it was' to correctly indicate the past possession and the bicycle's origin. Also add a comma before the conjunction 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, I think it's popular in my country because, uh, there's many bicycle you can rent on the road that it costs you bike.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular in my country because there are many bicycles you can rent on the street for a small fee.

Multiple issues: 'it's popular' refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'they're' or rephrase 'bikes are popular' (subject-verb agreement). 'There's many bicycle' is wrong: 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' for plural, and 'bicycle' must be plural 'bicycles.' 'You can rent on the road' is awkward; 'on the street' is more natural. 'That it costs you bike' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'for a small fee' or 'for a low cost.' The corrected sentence uses plural agreement and clearer phrasing.'