Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a brief topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Mention what kind of bike it was, how often you used it, and a short memory or reason why it mattered. Use a linking word to connect the sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that I rode almost every day when I was eight. Because it was lightweight and bright, I felt confident cycling around the neighborhood, and my parents often came with me to the park.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "also") to make the answer coherent and avoid one-word replies.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in my city there are bike lanes and rental schemes, so many students and office workers cycle to save time and money.

× Yeah.

✓ Yes, they are.

The student's response 'Yeah.' is overly informal and does not provide a complete answer to the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The question asks for a yes/no judgment about the popularity of bikes, so a full sentence matching the present-tense general question is appropriate. This correction uses third person plural subject 'they' to refer to 'bikes' and the present tense 'are' to state popularity. Suggestion: answer with a complete sentence such as 'Yes, they are' or add a brief explanation, e.g. 'Yes, they are because many people use them for commuting.'