Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and add one short supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, state simply whether you had a bike, who it belonged to or how you used it, and one brief memory or reason.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to school every day with my friends.

제안: Answer the question clearly and give a specific reason with correct grammar and linking words. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then add one or two concrete reasons or examples using linking phrases like "because" or "for example." Avoid vague phrases like "use the community."

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to markets or work in urban areas to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yeah, I have. Yeah, I had on that time.

✓ Yes, I did. Yes, I had one at that time.

The question asks about possession in the past ("Did you have a bike when you were a child?"), so the response should use past simple. 'I have' is present tense and 'I had on that time' is ungrammatical. Use the past auxiliary 'did' for short answers: 'Yes, I did.' For the second clause, use 'I had one at that time' to indicate possession in the past. Also replace 'on' with 'one' and use 'at that time' for correct time expression.

× Yes, so yes, my country is popular because it's a cheap and use the community.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are cheap and useful for the community.

The student’s reply is ungrammatical and confused. The topic is bikes, so the subject should be 'bikes' not 'my country is popular.' Use plural 'bikes are popular.' 'It's a cheap' incorrectly uses singular 'it' and 'cheap' needs a noun or be adjectival for 'they' ('they are cheap'). 'Use the community' is wrong: intended meaning is that bikes are useful for the community, so use the adjective 'useful' and the preposition 'for.' The corrected sentence uses plural agreement, appropriate adjective form, and correct preposition.