Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は短く直接的ですが、質問の時制（過去）に合っていません。また、答えが現在の所有について述べているため内容がずれており、詳細が欠けています。改善点：①時制に注意して過去の経験について答える（過去形を使う）。②簡潔な主題文のあとに、1〜2文で補足説明を付ける。③接続詞（because, so, whenなど）を使って理由や状況を明確にする。例：過去に自転車を持っていたか、誰から貰ったか、どのくらい乗っていたかなどの具体例を入れると良い。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old, which my parents bought for me for my birthday. I used it every day to ride to my friend's house and practice in the park, so it became my favourite way to get around.

제안: 答えは意見と理由を示しており良いですが、文法と語順、語彙の選び方に問題があります。改善点：①文法と語順を正しくし、冗長な表現を削る。②具体的なデータや例を入れて説得力を高める（例えばどの年齢層が使っているか、どの場面で使われているか）。③接続詞（because, therefore, for example）を適切に使う。

예시: Yes, I believe bicycles are quite popular in my country because many students and office workers use them to commute. For example, in my neighbourhood you can see groups of students cycling to school in the morning, and bicycle lanes are common in many cities, which makes cycling convenient.

× Yes, I have one right now.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child, and I still have one now.

The examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child, which requires past tense. The original sentence uses present simple 'I have' which does not match the time frame. Use past tense 'had' to refer to childhood and optionally add 'still have' to indicate continuing possession. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference in the question.

× Yeah, I think so, because all this no almost student are using bicycle to go to their school or workplace.

✓ Yeah, I think so, because almost all students use bicycles to go to their schools or workplaces.

This sentence has multiple errors: word order and extra words ('all this no almost') are incorrect, 'student' should be plural 'students', and 'are using' can be simplified to present simple 'use' for habitual actions. Also 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles', and countable nouns 'school' and 'workplace' should be plural to match 'students'. Suggestion: remove extraneous words, use correct word order, make nouns plural for general statements, and use present simple for habitual actions.

× So yeah, I think it's popular.

✓ So yeah, I think it's popular.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present tense 'is' and the contraction 'it's' appropriately to state a general opinion. No -ing form correction is needed.