Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting detail. Say you didn’t own a bike, then briefly explain how you learned to ride with specific detail and a linking word. Avoid filler words like “Umm.”

예시: No, I didn't own a bike as a child. However, I learned to ride because my best friend had one, so we practiced together every weekend in the park until I felt confident.

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct and more specific. Use a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and provide a concrete example or reason. Use a linking word to connect opinion and evidence.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people post photos and videos on social media of long-distance motorcycle trips, especially to nearby provinces, which shows a growing touring culture.

× Umm, I didn't have a bike, but I had known how to play bike because my friend has one and we've tried to practice it.

✓ Umm, I didn't have a bike, but I knew how to ride a bike because my friend had one and we tried to practice it.

The phrase 'had known' is incorrect here because past simple 'knew' should be used to indicate a past state or ability; 'have known' (present perfect) or 'had known' (past perfect) are used for different time relationships. Also 'play bike' is wrong collocation; use 'ride a bike'. 'My friend has one' should be 'my friend had one' to keep past-tense consistency. 'We've tried to practice it' (present perfect) conflicts with the past narrative; change to 'we tried to practice it' (past simple). Suggestions: use simple past consistently for events in the past, use 'know' -> 'knew' for past ability, use 'ride a bike' for the verb phrase, and match tense across clauses.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because I see a lot of bikers who who tries to explore a lot of provinces in the social media.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because I see a lot of bikers who try to explore many provinces on social media.

There is a subject-verb agreement error: the relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'bikers' (plural), so the verb should be 'try' not 'tries'. Also fix duplicated 'who', change 'a lot of provinces' to 'many provinces' for naturalness, and use 'on social media' not 'in the social media'. Suggestions: ensure the verb agrees with the noun it refers to (plural subjects use plural verbs), avoid duplicate words, and use common preposition 'on' with 'social media'.