Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural, and add a short reason or detail. Use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail, linked naturally. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride outside, so I usually played indoors or used a scooter instead.

제안: Answer directly, correct grammar, and give a specific reason or example to support your view. Use linking words (for example, because, however) to make the response coherent and concise.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because few cities have safe cycling lanes. For example, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for commuting, and parents often avoid buying bikes for children due to traffic safety concerns.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Missing definite/indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'child'. English requires an article or other determiner with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: use 'a child' or rephrase as 'when I was a child'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Now in my country the bike is not popular so no many people or children use them.

✓ Now in my country bikes are not popular, so not many people or children use them.

Multiple issues: word order and article use. 'the bike' implies a specific bike; general statement about bikes needs plural 'bikes' and plural verb agreement. 'no many people' is ungrammatical; correct phrasing is 'not many people'. Also pronoun 'them' then refers to 'bikes' which should match; original had singular 'the bike' causing mismatch. Suggestion: use plural noun 'bikes are not popular' and phrase 'not many people or children use them'. Grammar problem type ID: 26