Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (because/so/and). Avoid redundancy and keep it under 3–4 short sentences. For example, mention who bought it, how you used it, and a brief memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and the park every weekend. Because I rode it so often, I became quite confident cycling on busy streets.

제안: Clarify your opinion and give specific reasons or examples. Start with a direct statement (Yes/No). Use linking words (for example, because, however) and specific evidence such as who rides bikes, where, and why (health, cost, traffic). Avoid unclear metaphors or filler words like “umm.” Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips to save money and avoid traffic. For example, students and delivery workers often ride bicycles in cities, especially during rush hour.

× Yes I do, my parents have to bike.

✓ Yes, I did. My parents used to ride bikes.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Yes I do' is present tense—use 'Yes, I did'. 'have to bike' is incorrect here: 'have to' expresses obligation; to describe habitual action in the past use 'used to' or the simple past. Also 'bike' as a verb is acceptable but 'ride bikes' is more natural. Suggestion: use past tense expressions such as 'I did' and 'my parents used to ride bikes.'

× Yes umm by exam like propeller in my country.

✓ Yes, well, bicycles are very common in my country.

The student's reply is ungrammatical and unclear. It contains fragments ('by exam like propeller') that do not form a coherent sentence. The examiner asked whether bikes are popular, so reply should be a clear statement in the present simple: 'Bicycles are very common/in my country' or 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.' Suggestion: use simple, direct phrasing and present simple tense for general facts (e.g., 'Bicycles are very common here.').