Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu thông tin. Hãy mở rộng bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn nêu rõ có hay không và thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: mô tả chiếc xe, ai tặng, bạn đã dùng nó như thế nào hoặc kỷ niệm liên quan). Giữ tổng câu không quá 5 câu, dùng liên từ để liên kết ý.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I rode it to visit friends in my neighbourhood. It had a bell and a basket, which made it feel special, and I remember learning to ride it with my father’s help.

제안: Câu trả lời lộn xộn, ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ: "forbidden to write up", "bike score"), thiếu rõ ràng và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Hãy đưa ra một câu chủ đề rõ ràng nêu ý kiến, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 câu giải thích với lý do cụ thể (tuổi tác, mục đích sử dụng, phương tiện thay thế), dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'however' để mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói lắp.

예시: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country because many children and young people use them for short trips and exercise. However, fewer adults ride bikes regularly due to busy commutes and limited cycling infrastructure, so they often prefer motorbikes or cars.

× It depends on age of people.

✓ It depends on the age of the people.

The noun phrase 'age of people' needs a definite article 'the' to refer to a specific group; also 'the people' is more natural. Use 'the' before 'age' when specifying which age is being referred to. Suggestion: say 'It depends on the age of the people' or more naturally 'It depends on people's ages.'

× If you under 18 you are forbidden to write up.

✓ If you are under 18, you are not allowed to ride a bike.

The original sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' after 'you' (subject-verb structure) and uses incorrect verb phrase 'write up' which is wrong in context. Also 'forbidden to' is grammatical but 'not allowed to' is more natural. Use a comma after the conditional clause. Suggestion: 'If you are under 18, you are not allowed to ride a bike.'

× Bike score.

✓ Bike ownership is common among young people.

'Bike score' is not a grammatical sentence and doesn't convey clear meaning. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Replace with a complete sentence that answers the question: e.g. 'Bike ownership is common among young people.' Suggestion: choose a clear subject and verb to express the idea.