Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense and be more informative. Use past tense for past experiences, give a direct topic sentence then add one or two supporting details (age, who gave it to you, how you used it). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use a linking word if you add details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, so it helped me gain confidence and independence.

제안: Complete the sentence and avoid grammatical errors (singular/plural). Use a clear topic sentence and then give specific reasons or examples linking them with words like 'because', 'for example', or 'also'. Keep responses concise and relevant.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and commuters prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student's reply uses the present perfect 'I have', which is incorrect for a simple past context. Use the simple past 'I did' (short for 'I did have') to match the examiner's past-tense question. Suggestion: answer past-tense yes/no questions with 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't' or provide a past-tense full sentence like 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my countries because.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because...

The examiner asked about the student's country in singular. The student used the plural 'countries', which is inconsistent. Use the singular noun 'country' when referring to the nation where you live. Also, the sentence ends with 'because' and needs a reason to be complete. Suggestion: use 'country' and complete the sentence with a reason, for example 'because many people use them for commuting.'