Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn đã mắc hai lỗi chính: phát âm/viết sai một số từ (you you, chill thay vì child) và câu trả lời thiếu nội dung — thí sinh chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: mô tả chiếc xe, tần suất sử dụng hoặc kỷ niệm). Sử dụng từ nối nếu cần để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven. I rode it almost every afternoon around my neighborhood, and I remember learning to balance without training wheels after a few weeks.

제안: Thí sinh lại chỉ lặp câu hỏi và còn sai chính tả/phát âm (buys thay vì bikes). Câu trả lời cần nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, kèm lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, however, for example) và tránh lặp lại câu hỏi.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and workers use bikes to commute to school or work, and some cities have invested in bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Did you have a bike when you you were a chill?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student repeated the pronoun 'you' and misspelled 'child' as 'chill'. Remove the extra 'you' to avoid repetition and correct the spelling to 'child'. Also ensure the sentence matches the past tense question form 'Did you have', which is already correct. Suggestion: Read the sentence slowly to avoid repetition and check spelling of similar-sounding words.

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'buys' instead of 'bikes' due to a spelling error; 'buys' is a verb/noun unrelated to the intended noun 'bikes'. Replace with 'bikes' to make the sentence meaningful. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct for present simple questions. Suggestion: Pronounce the word clearly and verify spelling, especially for minimal pairs like 'b' vs 'v' or similar sounding words.