Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng về thì và cấu trúc ngữ pháp; tránh lỗi thì và chia động từ, dùng câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc, giảm các tiếng ngập ngừng. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu lý do và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Ví dụ: nói rõ quá khứ (I didn’t have a bike as a child) rồi tiếp tục với thời điểm bạn mua và hoàn cảnh (When I was 18...). Hãy sửa các lỗi phổ biến: "I don't" → "I didn't", "I have to do" → "I had to do" (nếu muốn nói quá khứ), "have money to bought" → "had enough money to buy".

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. When I was 18, I worked a part-time job and saved enough money to buy one. It felt great to finally have my own bike because it made commuting and running errands much easier.

제안: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ liên kết để trình bày lý do. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn (Yes, they used to be popular), rồi giải thích nguyên nhân với linking words như "because" hoặc "mainly because" và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh. Sử dụng thì chính xác: "used to be popular" hoặc "was popular" để nói về quá khứ.

예시: Yes, bikes used to be very popular in my country about ten years ago. However, nowadays fewer people ride them because many families can afford cars and motorbikes. For example, in my neighborhood most people now prefer motorbikes for quicker trips.

× No I don't when I was 18 I uh have to do a part time job and then I have money to bought to buy a bike.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was 18, I had to do a part-time job and then I had money to buy a bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect verb forms. 'No I don't' should be past 'No, I didn't' because the question asks about childhood (past). 'I uh have to do' should be past 'I had to do.' 'I have money to bought to buy a bike' uses incorrect tense and an extra 'bought'; correct is 'I had money to buy a bike.' Also add commas for clarity and hyphenate 'part-time.' Suggestion: keep all verbs in the past when referring to past events and use base form after 'to' (to buy).

× MMM, yes, but it is not very popular nowadays. It, it, it really was popular in uh, about 10 years ago, but now people uh, umm, have cars and uh, motorbikes, so.

✓ Yes, bikes are not very popular nowadays. They were really popular about ten years ago, but now people have cars and motorbikes.

The student uses 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural) and mixes present and past awkwardly. Use 'bikes are' or 'they are' for plural subject. 'It really was popular' should be 'They were really popular' to match plural noun and past tense. Also streamline: 'nowadays' with present 'are not very popular' and past 'were' for ten years ago. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and keep tense consistent for time references.