Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ короткий и грамматически неверен: использовано настоящее время вместо прошедшего. Нужно сразу отвечать по сути, дать одну тему-предложение и при необходимости добавить одно-два поддерживающих предложения с деталями. Также избегайте разговорных вставок и используйте связки, чтобы звучать более естественно.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I often rode it to my friend’s house. It helped me feel independent and I remember learning to ride without training wheels.

제안: Ответ некорректен по грамматике и лексике, содержит запинки и неточные слова («show» неправильно). Нужно давать тему-предложение, затем одно-два конкретных объяснения с союзами (for example, because, so). Убирайте междометия и говорите связно, используя подходящую лексику.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many bike lanes and rental services, so cycling is convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The student used present tense 'do' which is incorrect for a past question. Use past tense auxiliary 'did' to agree with the past-tense question. Suggestion: respond with past tense auxiliaries or past verbs for past questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.').

× Yes I do umm bike show popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student response is ungrammatical and missing verbs and proper word order. 'I do umm' incorrectly repeats the auxiliary and 'bike show popular' is incorrect structure. The intended meaning uses the present simple to state general fact: subject + verb + complement. Use 'I think' or 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' Also ensure plural 'bikes' with verb 'are'. Suggestion: use clear sentence structure: subject + verb + complement, and avoid filler words like 'umm' or place them appropriately ('Um, yes, I think...').