Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and concise phrasing are needed. Begin with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid repetition. Keep the answer to 1–2 sentences and add a short supporting detail if helpful (e.g., how you used it).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to visit my friends and explore the neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: Improve grammar, word choice and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because or for). Use correct plural forms and verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work. For example, most of my neighbors cycle daily, and others ride on weekends for exercise and leisure.

× Of course I had a bike when I were when I was a child.

✓ Of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The error uses 'were' instead of the correct past tense singular verb 'was' for the subject 'I'. This is a subject-verb agreement and incorrect verb form in the past; use 'was' with I in past simple. Suggestion: remember that 'I' pairs with 'was' (I was) in past simple sentences. ID:9

× Yes, almost every people I know have bikes and they use it almost every day to go to work or just having for sports in every weekend.

✓ Yes, almost everyone I know has a bike and they use it almost every day to go to work or just for sport on weekends.

Multiple issues addressed that match the allowed list: 'every people' is incorrect — use 'everyone' or 'every person' (singular distributive), so Grammar Problem Type 1 (singular/plural) applies. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular indefinite 'everyone' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'Bikes' changed to 'a bike' to match 'everyone'. 'They use it' is acceptable but better as 'they use it' referring to 'a bike'; changed 'it almost every day' remains. 'Just having for sports in every weekend' is ungrammatical: replace with 'just for sport on weekends' — this corrects preposition use (ID 11), verb form ('having' is wrong here, correct is noun 'sport' or 'for exercise') and time expression ('on weekends' is natural). Suggestions: use 'everyone' with singular verb, match singular/plural between subject and object, use 'for sport' or 'for exercise', and use 'on weekends' for habitual actions.