Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically accurate, concise, and directly answer the question. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one brief reason with correct verb forms and a linking word. Avoid repeating the time phrase twice.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my father didn’t allow me to ride one. As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school.

제안: Give a clear opinion, use natural vocabulary, and add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g., “popular among young people,” “for commuting,” “for selling food”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. They use bicycles for commuting short distances and for small businesses, such as selling street food, because bikes are cheap and easy to park.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The speaker refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the past tense should be used. 'Don't have' is present tense and mismatches the time reference. Use 'didn't have' for simple past negative. Suggestion: Use past simple for verbs when describing completed past situations.

× My father not give me permission to drive a bike when I was a child.

✓ My father did not give me permission to ride a bike when I was a child.

Two issues: missing auxiliary 'did' for past negative and incorrect verb 'drive' for bicycles. The sentence needs past simple negative: 'did not give'. Also use 'ride a bike' (common collocation) rather than 'drive a bike'. Suggestion: Form past negative with 'did not' + base verb and use appropriate verb collocations ('ride a bike').

× Of course bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Of course bikes were popular in my country.

Context is unclear but Examiner asked generally; if referring to present general fact, original 'are popular' is acceptable. However because previous context discussed childhood, if referring to that period say 'were popular'. Decide based on context: use present simple ('are popular') for current general facts and past simple ('were popular') for past. Suggestion: Match tense to the time frame being discussed.

× Mostly the bikes are popular in the young ones because they prefer the bikes for using traveling and many purposes for selling food and many items.

✓ Bikes are especially popular among young people because they prefer them for traveling and for many purposes, such as selling food and other items.

Several errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before general plural 'bikes'; awkward phrase 'the young ones' should be 'young people'; pronoun clarity—use 'them' to refer to bikes; 'for using traveling' is ungrammatical—use 'for traveling'; 'many purposes for selling food and many items' is repetitive—clarify with 'for many purposes, such as selling food and other items'. Also adjust word order and conjunctions for natural English. Suggestion: Use articles correctly with general plural nouns (no article), use correct noun phrases ('young people'), and simplify lists with 'such as'.