Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain with one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word order (e.g., "training wheels" and "learn to ride"). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but it always had training wheels, so I never learned to ride without them. As a result, I still can't ride a bike well, so nowadays I usually walk or use public transport instead.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and one example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "therefore") and correct grammar ("have been popular", "environmental benefits"). Avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country because people are more aware of health and environmental benefits. For example, in Amati many residents now cycle to work, which has reduced traffic and improved air quality.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child but it always had extra wheels training wheels so I never learned the ride without them and now I prefer walking and using public transport because I don't know how to learn.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but it always had extra training wheels, so I never learned to ride without them, and now I prefer walking and using public transport because I don't know how to learn.

Multiple past-tense related problems: incorrect infinitive after 'learn' and awkward noun order. 'Learned the ride' is incorrect; the verb collocates with infinitive 'learn to ride.' Also 'extra wheels training wheels' is wrong word order; correct is 'extra training wheels.' Commas are added to join clauses correctly. Suggestion: use 'learned to ride' for acquiring the skill and place adjectives before nouns ('training wheels').

× Yes, I think because recently bikes are have been popular, have been popular in my country, especially in Amati, because it's really great.

✓ Yes, I think bikes have recently become popular in my country, especially in Amati, because it is really great for our environment.

Tense and word order errors: 'are have been popular, have been popular' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'have become' or 'have been' with correct word order. Also unclear phrase 'Change on our environment' is a fragment and incorrect preposition; replace with 'for our environment.' Suggestion: use 'have recently become popular' to indicate a recent change and complete the sentence with a clear reason phrase 'for our environment.'