Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct but very short and lacks development. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, brief example or a short memory). Use a linking word to connect sentences. Keep responses natural and under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked or took public transport to school because my family lived in a busy city where cycling felt unsafe. For example, I remember my parents preferred I walk with friends rather than ride on crowded streets.

제안: The answer is direct but too short and lacks explanation. Improve by giving a topic sentence then supporting reasons or comparisons. Use linking words (because, however, while) and provide a specific detail or example to make your opinion convincing. Keep under five sentences and natural vocabulary.

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience. However, in some cities cycling is becoming more common among young people and for short commutes, especially where bike lanes have been added.

× No, I didn't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

This sentence is grammatically correct for past tense negative; no change needed. Use of 'didn't have' correctly matches the past simple question 'Did you have...?'.

× No, I don't think so.

✓ No, I don't think so.

This sentence is grammatically correct for expressing a present opinion. The present simple 'don't think' correctly matches the current viewpoint about bikes' popularity.