Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and a natural sentence structure. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it under five sentences and avoid grammatical errors. For example, use the past simple: "I didn’t have a bike when I was a child." You can then give a reason or a short example, using linking words like "because" or "so."

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed bicycles from neighbors to ride to school or play with friends.

제안: Make the response clearer and more organized. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, bikes are very popular in my country."). Then add one or two specific reasons or examples, using linking words such as "because," "for example," or "also." Avoid repetition and filler words. Use plural forms correctly ("bikes" and "people").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school, and children often learn to ride at an early age.

× I never have a bike in my childhood.

✓ I never had a bike in my childhood.

The sentence refers to a past time period 'in my childhood', so the verb should be in the past tense. Change 'have' to the past form 'had'. Also consider more natural phrasing: 'I never had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, of course bike is very popular in my country and somebody also depend depend their family experience, uh, they are from by bike ride.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country, and some people also depend on their family's experience; for example, they learned to ride a bike from family members.

Multiple issues corrected following the allowed problem types: 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') to match general statement (singular/plural issue). 'is' must change to 'are' to agree with plural subject (subject-verb agreement tied to pluralization). 'somebody' should be 'some people' (incorrect pronoun/quantity usage). 'depend' requires the preposition 'on' (preposition issue) and should be 'depend on their family's experience' or better 'rely on their family's experience' (word choice and possessive noun). The phrase 'they are from by bike ride' is ungrammatical (sentence structure issue) and is corrected to 'they learned to ride a bike from family members' to express the intended meaning clearly. Suggestions: use plural when making general statements, ensure subject-verb agreement, use 'depend on' or 'rely on', and restructure unclear fragments into clear clauses.