Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ: dùng thì đúng (bought, learned), mạo từ và danh từ đếm được (a bicycle), loại bỏ lặp từ và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng. Thêm câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi cung cấp chi tiết bổ sung có liên kết bằng các từ nối như "when" hoặc "because". Giữ không quá 4-5 câu.

예시: Yes, I did. My grandparents bought me a bicycle when I was a child, and I learned to ride it at the age of seven. I used it mainly to go to school because it was faster than walking. I remember feeling very proud and comfortable riding it around my neighborhood.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp số nhiều/ít và cấu trúc câu: dùng "each family has" hoặc "most families have", sửa trật tự từ và dùng từ vựng chính xác như "affordable" đúng chỗ. Thêm một dẫn chứng cụ thể hoặc so sánh để làm chi tiết rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để nối ý.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because most families have at least one. They are relatively cheap and affordable, so many people use them for short trips. For example, students and market vendors often cycle to save money and avoid traffic.

× Yes I did. When I was a child my grandparents bought me one bicycle to riding a school and I learn to ride bicycle when I was 7 years old and I think it is so comfortable to so comfortable and convenience.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child my grandparents bought me a bicycle to ride to school, and I learned to ride a bicycle when I was seven years old. I think it was very comfortable and convenient.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and tense consistency. 'to riding' is incorrect after 'to' infinitive; use 'to ride'. 'learn' should be past tense 'learned' to match 'When I was a child'. 'one bicycle' is unnatural; use 'a bicycle'. Repetition 'so comfortable to so comfortable' is redundant; simplify to 'very comfortable and convenient'. Also use numerals as words for ages in formal writing: 'seven years old'. Suggestions: ensure verbs match past time frame, use infinitive after 'to', avoid repetition, and choose appropriate articles ('a').

× I think bikes are very popular in my country because one family have at least one bicycle and it's so cheap and affordable to people buy it.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because each family has at least one bicycle, and they are so cheap and affordable for people to buy.

Errors include incorrect subject-verb agreement: 'one family have' should be 'each family has' (singular subject needs singular verb). 'it's so cheap and affordable to people buy it' has wrong pronoun and word order; better: 'they are so cheap and affordable for people to buy' or 'it is so cheap and affordable for people to buy bicycles'. Suggestions: match verb form to subject number, use 'each' for singular distribution, use correct pronouns ('they' or 'it') and correct infinitive phrase order ('for people to buy').