Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct past-tense response and add one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense for past events, vary vocabulary slightly, and keep it within 2–4 sentences. For example, say when you got the bike, who gave it to you, or a short memory to make the answer more natural.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. It was my favourite toy for several years.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, use a linking word to introduce a reason, and correct grammar (e.g., remove extra words and use 'there are' correctly). Add a specific example or comparison to strengthen your point and keep answers concise (2–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because of frequent traffic jams. For instance, many commuters choose bikes for short trips in cities, especially during peak hours, since it is faster and cheaper than driving.

× Yes, I have one.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response should also be in past tense. Using 'have' (present tense) is inconsistent. Change to 'had' to match past time reference. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame mentioned (use past simple for past situations).

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because of there are so many traffic jams.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many traffic jams.

The phrase 'because of' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase (e.g., 'because of traffic jams'), not by a clause starting with 'there are'. Here a clause ('there are so many traffic jams') follows, so use 'because' to introduce the clause. Alternatively, keep 'because of' and change the following to a noun phrase: 'because of so many traffic jams.' Suggestion: use 'because' before clauses and 'because of' before nouns; also ensure clause structure is correct.