Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct but too short and lacks detail. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (reason, brief example, or a memory). Use a linking word if you add more than one sentence. Keep it natural and no more than five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment building and my parents preferred I play in the communal yard, so they didn’t buy a bike for me. As a result, I usually walked to school or rode public transport with my friends.

제안: Your answer shows a clear opinion but has grammar and repetition issues and lacks supporting details. Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, correcting grammar, and adding one or two specific reasons or examples using a linking word to connect ideas. Use relevant vocabulary like “commuting,” “fitness,” or “environmental.”

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes and exercise, and cities have invested in bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yes, it is popular in my in our country.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country.

The speaker refers to 'bikes' (plural), so the pronoun and verb must be plural. Using 'it' is incorrect for plural nouns. Also 'my in our' is a redundancy/typo; choose one possessive. Correct form: 'they are popular in our country.' Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to match the plural subject; remove the extra 'my' to avoid redundancy.