Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and provide a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two concise details (who used it, how often, a memorable moment). Avoid incorrect tense and overly short answers.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember having a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Use the correct tense and a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar (say “Yes, I do”) and replace vague phrases like “do their appointments” with precise activities. Limit to up to five sentences and use linking words (for example, therefore, because, and) to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I do. I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many students ride to school and older people use bikes to go to the market or visit friends, so bicycles are common in both cities and small towns.

× Yes, I have 5.

✓ Yes, I had five.

The question asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense. 'Have' is present; use 'had'. Also write numbers in words in formal speech: 'five'. Suggestion: Match the verb tense to the time frame in the question: use past simple for past situations.

× Yes I did. I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country.

The examiner asked a present-tense question ('Do you think...'). The student answered 'Yes I did', which is past tense and does not match. Use 'Yes, I do' to confirm current opinion. Suggestion: For present-opinion questions, reply with present-tense auxiliaries (do/does).

× All kids and older people love to use bike to do their appointments.

✓ All kids and older people love to use bikes to get to their appointments.

There are multiple issues: 'use bike' is incorrect because 'bike' needs plural or an article; here plural 'bikes' fits. 'Do their appointments' is unnatural; 'get to their appointments' or 'go to their appointments' is correct. Also possessive 'their' should be used before 'appointments'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements (bikes) and common collocations ('get to appointments').