Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the tense and be more natural and slightly longer. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add a short specific detail or reason using a linking word. Keep it under 5 sentences. For example, say you didn’t have one and give a brief reason or memory to make it natural and informative.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived close by, so I never needed one.

제안: Fix subject-verb agreement and give more specific supporting details with a linking word. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason or comparison to support your view. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "widespread," "commute"). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them to commute in cities because they are cheaper and more convenient than cars, and there are also dedicated bike lanes in several towns.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question is in the past tense: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use past simple in the response. 'Do not have' is present tense and mismatches the question. Use 'didn't' (did not) plus base verb if needed; here the full sentence can be 'No, I didn't' or 'No, I didn't have one.' For clarity and completeness, 'No, I didn't have one' is recommended. Suggestion: Match the verb tense to the question (past simple) and include the main verb if you want a longer response (e.g., 'No, I didn't have a bike').

× Yes, I think many people has bikes in my country.

✓ Yes, I think many people have bikes in my country.

The subject 'many people' is plural, so the verb must be the base form 'have' (not 'has'). Using 'has' is the third-person singular form and does not agree with the plural subject. Suggestion: For plural subjects use 'have' (e.g., 'many people have'), and you can also say 'Yes, I think a lot of people have bikes in my country' for naturalness.