Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, accurate, and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct vocabulary (use "bike" not "back") and reduce repetition. Use one linking phrase if adding details (e.g., "because" or "and").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I rode it to visit my friends every weekend because it was faster than walking.

제안: Answer directly and then give a clear reason with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words (e.g., "because," "so") to connect ideas. Be specific about who uses bikes and for what (commuting, exercise, leisure). Avoid unclear pronouns and fragmented sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save money and stay fit.

× I'm so glad I had a back when I was a little girl.

✓ I'm so glad I had a bike when I was a little girl.

The student used the wrong word 'back' instead of 'bike', which is a vocabulary choice causing a sentence structure error because it makes the sentence meaningless in context. Replace 'back' with 'bike' to convey the intended meaning. Also keep past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a little girl'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× I'm so excited about it.

✓ I was very excited about it.

The context refers to a past event (having a bike as a child), so the present tense 'I'm so excited' is inconsistent. Change to past tense 'I was very excited' to match the time frame. This is a sentence structure/tense consistency issue. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× I think bike is kind of a sport it took him to exercise in anytime, anywhere.

✓ I think cycling is kind of a sport; it allows you to exercise anytime, anywhere.

Multiple issues: 'bike' as a noun needs an article or should be replaced by the gerund 'cycling' to mean the activity; this is an article/word choice error. 'it took him to exercise' is incorrect verb usage and pronoun choice — use 'it allows you to exercise' to express capability. Also add appropriate punctuation to separate clauses. Overall fix addresses article/word choice and pronoun and verb usage. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 22)