Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense and clarity. Use past tense for childhood, give a direct topic sentence, then one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and contradictions (e.g. "I don't have" vs childhood). Add a brief reason or memory and a linking word for coherence.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my parents were worried about traffic. As a result, I never learned to ride, so even now I feel uncomfortable on a bike.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, use plural and correct articles, and explain why with specific details and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "especially for the child"; be specific about who and why. If you dislike bikes, briefly say reason to justify your opinion.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially among children and commuters. Many people use them because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. However, I don't like cycling much because the roads are often unsafe and crowded.

× No, I don't have a bike and I can't.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike and I couldn't.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child). The student used present tense 'don't have' and 'can't', which is inconsistent with the past context. Change to past simple 'didn't have' and 'couldn't' to match the timeframe. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when referring to past situations.

× I can't drive the bike.

✓ I couldn't ride a bike.

Because the context is past ability, use the past form of the modal verb 'could' rather than 'can't'. Also, native speakers usually say 'ride a bike' rather than 'drive the bike'. Suggestion: use 'couldn't ride a bike' for past inability and use the indefinite article when speaking generally.

× Yes, I think it's popular, especially for the child, but I don't like it.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular, especially for children, but I don't like them.

The student used singular 'it's' and 'the child' but is referring to bikes in general (plural). Use plural pronouns and nouns: 'they're' or 'they are' for 'bikes are', and 'children' for plural. Also change 'I don't like it' to 'I don't like them' to agree with the plural subject. Suggestion: match number between nouns and pronouns and use plural forms when speaking about a general category.