Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and slightly more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repeating words and try to include a time phrase or brief reason to enrich the reply.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around our neighborhood almost every afternoon, often racing my friends or chasing the dogs, which helped me build confidence and fitness.

제안: Be more precise with vocabulary and grammar, and provide a linking word to connect ideas. Use plural/singular correctly and give a brief example or reason to support your view. Try to avoid small grammar mistakes (e.g., 'biking race' -> 'bike races').

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cycle to work to save money and avoid traffic, and others ride for sport — joining triathlons or local bike races on weekends.

× Some people use it to go to work and some people use it for hobbies like joining triathlons and biking race.

✓ Some people use them to go to work and some people use them for hobbies like joining triathlons and bike races.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches. 'Some people' is plural, so the pronoun referring to 'bikes' should be 'them' not 'it' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'biking race' is incorrect: use the plural noun 'bike races' to match the generic plural idea of races. Suggestion: keep plural agreement by using 'them' for bikes and plural nouns for countable activities (e.g., 'bike races').